Is it okay to refer to the ps, like say something like “the reason I am focusing on this” or a line like that?
Btw it sounds better in context
What in the world are you talking about?
Are you talking about having some sort of wall-breaking narrative that becomes a new way to interact with adcoms and to form a commentary on personal statements on the whole? Or, are you trying to lazily state the theme of your statement without unpacking it in the text?
(It is the second one, and you shouldn’t do that.)